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It settles deep this time
With the fangs that bury
Into my mind

You write a silly song
And move on

You keep your distance, dear
For these doors of mine won't
Let you in here

You write a silly song
And move on

I've been alone so long
I don't know if it's worth
Another song

I'll write a silly one
And move on

I'll write another one
And move on
:iconementhal:
First song lyric in a long time. There is a melody. But it's the words that matter.
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:iconshigatsu-baka:
I'd love to hear it sometime. ^_^
(Though these lyrics look simple, they're actually very complex and deep. I think it's lovely. :))
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:iconsandmanno3:
~sandmanno3 Oct 4, 2008   Writer
I want to hear it tooooooo XD
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:iconlacamilla:
~LaCamilla Sep 13, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeees, I'd very much like to hear the melody as well! :D I get this sort of... acoustic guitar, växelbas, folk-vibe off the lyrics... am I completely wrong? XD
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:iconementhal:
Well, acoustic guitar is all I have, so that part is certainly correct. :P Otherwise, I can't define it, really. You'd have to hear it. :)
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:iconlacamilla:
~LaCamilla Sep 17, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
You make me curious. Post, post, post! :3 (Or give us a link when you have uploaded it, pretty please. :3)
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:iconsmallfluffysomething:
Me wants to hear it :) I think it's so hard to read and think anything about lyrics when you don't hear the song, because you don't really know how it's meant to be. So you'll have to play me this silly song :)
*smack*
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:iconementhal:
I've recorded it but the quality's poor. Sooner or later I'll take the time to sit down and do it properly. I'll send it to you! :D
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:iconsmallfluffysomething:
yay! *jumpin up and down*
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